i have so much to say
but words of fog escape
it was a perfect day
but my emotional rape
i reach for snow flakes
who tell what to write
but for all it takes
i can ‘ t clear my sight
angst and questions
blasphemy of soul
masochist suggestions
words take their toll
mirrors : own to cut
fasces : cut to buy
people : asking what ?
and i : asking why .
order or entropy
i knew which it was
the universe’s canopy
between it and us
grammar a n d s p a c i n g
Personality and conversation
My emotions are still racing
But closer to elation
thank you
Awesome poem… It really says it all…. Puts everything into perspective… Tells things that others can’t understand…
well i can see someone has been listening to radiohead or pinkfloyd. good job
my money’s on Radiohead
The Poem is about my dog and the walks we take.
~ :)
Ugh….I don’t buy that. I know our dogs…I know you…and walking? The closest you and I have ever come from taking the dog for a walk was when we chase the dumbasses around the block when they escape the house….
OH, right, metaphor. GLAVIN
I like the 3, 4, 5th stanzas the best… they’re nice. almost like something I would write – uh! :cool: keep on pluggin, yo.
ps. radiohead is cool. ;)
Miles, you poor guy. You really need to get less interesting. Perhaps you have crossed the line from interesting to confusing and a little strange. Just thought I’d help your quest for a laday (yes, i misspelled on purpose).
Have a Nice Day
he’s too interesting ? …
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.
oh.
btw, get some new emoticons.. these suck.
Brenna: Thank you. And I enjoy Radiohead mucho, also.
Mandy: I know that you’re Mi Mi. It was the Laday.
Bryce: Our family rocks
Jeff: Let’s get those emoticons going. Moving ones. And secret ones.